Can someone check my grammer and sentence,please also can i apply for description checker near this experience? ty

2007-Present FDI Collateral Managment Sacramento, CA
Title Follow-up Agent
Follow-up on accounts to ensure proper vehicle titling documentation is received
Provided customer support via phone,email or fax
Update clients records via internal web base software document all action taken
. Lien Placement Agent
Filed approoriate state application to register new lien.
Verify for collateral packet to be complete before securing a untried lien
Ensure that contractual obligation are met for each client.
Took appropriate deed to correct any document that are missing or incomplete
2006-2007 SierraWes Drywall Loomis, CA
Accountant
AR /AP invoices,Data entry,collection and account reconciliation
Contacted sub contractors for upcoming jobs/prepare weekly aging report
Received incoming invoices and application of payment/enter payroll

2004-2006 Insurance Wholesalers Citrus Heights,CA
Customer Service Representative
Audit new business application for Life Insurance/Mortgage protection day after day
Assist agents with various correspondence and underwrite guides per company
Entering and setting the suspence of all endorsement into organization system
Completing production report weekly/Compliling data for month report sales
On your current job description, maintain the correct stressed. E.G. Provide (instead of provided), file (instead of filed) take instead of took-remember you are still doing this situation currently.

Appropriate is spelled wrong
Ensure that contractual obligation(s) are met (obligation should be pleural)

On your past positions make sure you use former tense-audited (instead of audit) assisted (instead of assist).
You have a duty listed-doesn't quite brand name sense:

Assist(ed) agents with various correspondence and underwrite guides per company ________

Do you mean to say :

Assist(ed) agents next to various correspondence and underwriting per company guidelines?

Compiling notes for month (end) sales report

endorsement should be pleural
first place you put down the word appropriate is spelled wrong. The second place is correct.

Last sentence: compiling is the correct spelling.

subsequent to last sentence: I think the word suspence should be suspense.

lien placement agent: remove the . beforehand the word lien.


Answers:    simply as the above has stated those error's are the only unadulterated ones i saw. Now for experience you will have enough. As long as a individual has the appropriate licences to operation with the accounts that the position will be overviewing you should be good. Remember near biggest thing they wanna see is your personality. If you are character and prompt that will give you a edge. Your employment will be to remind the clients why your agency is better then down the road by using your customer service experience. When you get experience surrounded by the account manager position possibly you could look at doing my type of job. I am a personal lines Account Executive once you know your job it is alot more fun to operation with new clients everyday and i find it alot more rewarding. Good luck you come across to have the credentials now budge woah them with personality to. You will do great.